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I'm working on a sequel to my QAF story "Rocky Horror" and I seem to have written myself into a corner and I can't figure out how to get out of it. Brian and Justin are in the back room, enjoying themselves as they do. They are getting to the part where the fucking will commence, and here's the issue - Brian is dressed as Brad (t-shirt and boxers) and Justin is dressed and Dr. Frank N. Furter (corset and black undies). Where the hell would the condom and lube be?

HELP!!!

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Date: 2007-03-03 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] claybarns.livejournal.com
How about the T-shirt has a pocket or the boxers has an inside pocket
CB

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Date: 2007-03-03 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverfox.livejournal.com
Near to hand. ;) Brian and Justin never go anywhere without the tools. ;) Besides, the backroom is required to have those on supply. ;) Place a bowl nearby so you don't have to rewrite. It's easier but it's also logical. :)

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Date: 2007-03-03 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] switch842.livejournal.com
True. Oo! I could have the bowl by the door or something and Brian just pick some up on the way in. That would be an easy enough I add I think..

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Date: 2007-03-03 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] riverfox.livejournal.com
That'll definitely work. One sentence, leave the rest to the reader till it's time to tear open that packet with his teeth. ;)

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Date: 2007-03-09 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pclu2004.livejournal.com
I wish I had read this sooner, but it was after I read the chapter..Haven't you ever seen any James Dean movies, (maaybe I'm too old), they would roll the lube and condom into the sleeve of the t-shirt. That's how we carried our cigarettes and combs back in the day.

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