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switch842Hey, Wraith!! I wanted to make a general post where we can discuss the remaking of "Ever the Same." One central place for our thoughts and communications. Since I finished the last vid I was working on (to be released soon), I thought I would put this one next on the list.
I've organized our previous discussion behind the cut and then we can add to it as we see fit. No hurry or anything. Just whenever. :-)
April 18
Switch: Free like water - the edit is just awkward on this. But I can't think of any watery clips. Maybe something from Watergate? But they weren't really together much there...
Wraith: I agree re: free like water, but I can't think of anything that would work in its place. It definitely needs to be Daniel after Jack's "we would stand in the wind" Maybe we could go metaphorical here? *ponders*
Switch: Both been shaken - again, just an awkward edit. We might be able to use the same clip but get the editing better.
Wraith: Also agree on "both been shaken" - I like the *idea* of the clip, but the execution could be better. I'm trying to think of a clip where they'd both be kinda upset, but I can't think of anything at the moment.
Switch: 2nd "Just let me hold you" etc (Serpent's Grasp) - The clip is LONG. I like the use of the clip here, but I think it needs to be split with something else?
Wraith: OH YES. I'm thinking it would probably work if "just let me hold you" was the same, switch to a new clip for "while you're falling apart", back to the hand on the face for "just let me hold you" and bring in a new clip right at the beginning of "we'll both fall down"
The best I can think of right not for "falling apart" would be either Abyss or Meridian, but we used a bunch of those already (quintessential J/D eps, y/y? lol)
Switch: Carry all your weight - Again, I like using The Light here, but it's a REALLY LONG sequence. Any thoughts?
Wraith:
Carry all your weight - I think maybe for that line, move to the quick shot from Evolution pt 2 where Jack's holding Daniel up b/c of his leg, then switch up to The Light for "you're no burden"? Or the other way around. The Evolution clip's already near the end, but moving it would free up a few beats for a new S9/10 clip
Wraith: I kinda wish there had been something better to use for "we were drawn from the weeds" - I kinda feel like maybe the first clip really needs to have both J&D visible in it.
April 26
Switch
I just watched and took notes this time. There are an awful lot of clips from the same episodes. And considering how much we have to work with, it seems a bit odd. But like you mentioned earlier, they are some of the quintessential J/D episodes. LOL Here's the count:
Fifth Race - 2 clips
Meridian - 3 clips, 2 of which are kind of long and the first 2 are close together in the edit
Abyss - 2 clips
Children of the Gods - 2 clips
Lost City - 4 clips (!!)
Serpent's Lair - 2 clips (one might be Within the Serpent's Grasp, but I tend to think of them as one ep)
Prisoners - 2 clips
Some other possible clips to be replaced or re-edited:
1st "Just let me hold you": Need - clip is long. Add in an additional scene to break it up?
2nd "Tell me everything you want me to be": The Other Side - I think this clip goes on too long. I like it for the first bit. Maybe find an additional clip for the "Forever in you..." bit
2nd "I'll be there for you": Lifeboat - this one's just kind of meh. It works, but we might be able to find something better.
2nd "Forever it's you": Absolute Power. LOVE this bit, I just think it needs to be clipped down and maybe another bit found for that musical interlude bit?
"You tide me over": I'm not too happy with this one, either. Like Lifeboat, it works OK, but could be better.
Here are possible additional episodes for use:
Sacrifices - nice bit of them walking through hall at the beginning (might be too similar to Prometheus Unbound clip, though)
Origin
The Shroud (possibly replacement for Evolution 2 in ending montage)
Rising Pt 1??
Broca Divide - the fight in the gateroom
Message in a Bottle - isn't there a bit when Daniel goes in to talk to Jack when he's stuck to the wall?
Serpent's Song - general back & forth in briefing room
I've organized our previous discussion behind the cut and then we can add to it as we see fit. No hurry or anything. Just whenever. :-)
April 18
Switch: Free like water - the edit is just awkward on this. But I can't think of any watery clips. Maybe something from Watergate? But they weren't really together much there...
Wraith: I agree re: free like water, but I can't think of anything that would work in its place. It definitely needs to be Daniel after Jack's "we would stand in the wind" Maybe we could go metaphorical here? *ponders*
Switch: Both been shaken - again, just an awkward edit. We might be able to use the same clip but get the editing better.
Wraith: Also agree on "both been shaken" - I like the *idea* of the clip, but the execution could be better. I'm trying to think of a clip where they'd both be kinda upset, but I can't think of anything at the moment.
Switch: 2nd "Just let me hold you" etc (Serpent's Grasp) - The clip is LONG. I like the use of the clip here, but I think it needs to be split with something else?
Wraith: OH YES. I'm thinking it would probably work if "just let me hold you" was the same, switch to a new clip for "while you're falling apart", back to the hand on the face for "just let me hold you" and bring in a new clip right at the beginning of "we'll both fall down"
The best I can think of right not for "falling apart" would be either Abyss or Meridian, but we used a bunch of those already (quintessential J/D eps, y/y? lol)
Switch: Carry all your weight - Again, I like using The Light here, but it's a REALLY LONG sequence. Any thoughts?
Wraith:
Carry all your weight - I think maybe for that line, move to the quick shot from Evolution pt 2 where Jack's holding Daniel up b/c of his leg, then switch up to The Light for "you're no burden"? Or the other way around. The Evolution clip's already near the end, but moving it would free up a few beats for a new S9/10 clip
Wraith: I kinda wish there had been something better to use for "we were drawn from the weeds" - I kinda feel like maybe the first clip really needs to have both J&D visible in it.
April 26
Switch
I just watched and took notes this time. There are an awful lot of clips from the same episodes. And considering how much we have to work with, it seems a bit odd. But like you mentioned earlier, they are some of the quintessential J/D episodes. LOL Here's the count:
Fifth Race - 2 clips
Meridian - 3 clips, 2 of which are kind of long and the first 2 are close together in the edit
Abyss - 2 clips
Children of the Gods - 2 clips
Lost City - 4 clips (!!)
Serpent's Lair - 2 clips (one might be Within the Serpent's Grasp, but I tend to think of them as one ep)
Prisoners - 2 clips
Some other possible clips to be replaced or re-edited:
1st "Just let me hold you": Need - clip is long. Add in an additional scene to break it up?
2nd "Tell me everything you want me to be": The Other Side - I think this clip goes on too long. I like it for the first bit. Maybe find an additional clip for the "Forever in you..." bit
2nd "I'll be there for you": Lifeboat - this one's just kind of meh. It works, but we might be able to find something better.
2nd "Forever it's you": Absolute Power. LOVE this bit, I just think it needs to be clipped down and maybe another bit found for that musical interlude bit?
"You tide me over": I'm not too happy with this one, either. Like Lifeboat, it works OK, but could be better.
Here are possible additional episodes for use:
Sacrifices - nice bit of them walking through hall at the beginning (might be too similar to Prometheus Unbound clip, though)
Origin
The Shroud (possibly replacement for Evolution 2 in ending montage)
Rising Pt 1??
Broca Divide - the fight in the gateroom
Message in a Bottle - isn't there a bit when Daniel goes in to talk to Jack when he's stuck to the wall?
Serpent's Song - general back & forth in briefing room
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Date: 2008-04-27 07:16 pm (UTC)It's not a problem; just comes up slightly 'jerky' looking on my computer. Fade in/out, maybe?
Perhaps from Death Knell when they come up out of the fallen gate? Or is Teal'c in the way too much?
Oooh, I like that! I don't mind Teal'c there. I just really kinda wanna see both their faces, unlike the current clip which is kinda too far away.
I agree 100% with this. But I'm not sure what would work as well with the "confession" type feeling.
If we can't come up with anything better, I don't think this is a dire problem, at least. *shrug* We'll think about it.
Maybe if we cut it at "and we'll both fall down"?
That's what I was thinking.
Any idea of what to use for "both fall down"?
Hmm... I'm trying to think of what else could go here. Something from The Shroud maybe?
Maybe. I've only seen that ep once as I was really un-squeeful about S9&10, so I can't really say if it'd have the right feel.
But I think if we're going to break it up, it needs to be consistent with what we're doing with the other occurences of this line.
I get what you're saying. I would really like the hand-holding in here somewhere though because it's such a cute moment. Why do they have to be more adorable than we can fit in 4 minutes or however long the song is? lol
Instead of doing the flip back & forth,
I'm just a little worried about them getting long. Also, I think that Light clip really needs to be over at the end of "you're no burden I assure" - letting it go through that instrumental bar is part of its length problem, I think.
Oooh! I like that!! That could definitely work.
And with that I've used up my stroke of genius for the month. ;-)
Yeah. If we're going to break up the bit before, Daniel at the gate can go into that musical bit and then this can start right on the line.
Agreed.
Also, just a thought for a different way of timing this clip - the music sort of builds up to the word "love". Maybe to fit that building of the music, start the line with Jack walking up to Daniel, and try to time the actual hug on "love"? I don't know if that'd work, but just an idea.
I'll see if I can get it to switch to Jack on "everything".
K, that would work. It'd just be nice to be a little more even.