That could be interesting....

[switch842]

Dear author. Your story sounded interesting. A new (to me) twist on the old gender-swap thing. I don't normally read gender-swap stuff, but this sounded sufficiently interesting enough for me to give it a chance. The header information all appeared to be grammatically correct and spelled properly. So, clicky I go.

However, I had to stop just into the second chapter when you had one character, who owns his own business, getting ready to go to a "chair holders" meeting. Ummm..... I don't quite think that's what you were going for.

How would a chair holders meeting work, anyway? Everyone shows up and "I've got my chair." "Here's mine." "Great. Meeting adjourned." I don't know...

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[wraith816.livejournal.com]

I know! It's a rare variant of the musical chairs game, right? *giggle*

[switch842.livejournal.com]

Yes! That's it! You hit it right on the head!! LOL