Aug. 27th, 2009
That could be interesting....
Aug. 27th, 2009 05:21 pmDear author. Your story sounded interesting. A new (to me) twist on the old gender-swap thing. I don't normally read gender-swap stuff, but this sounded sufficiently interesting enough for me to give it a chance. The header information all appeared to be grammatically correct and spelled properly. So, clicky I go.
However, I had to stop just into the second chapter when you had one character, who owns his own business, getting ready to go to a "chair holders" meeting. Ummm..... I don't quite think that's what you were going for.
How would a chair holders meeting work, anyway? Everyone shows up and "I've got my chair." "Here's mine." "Great. Meeting adjourned." I don't know...
However, I had to stop just into the second chapter when you had one character, who owns his own business, getting ready to go to a "chair holders" meeting. Ummm..... I don't quite think that's what you were going for.
How would a chair holders meeting work, anyway? Everyone shows up and "I've got my chair." "Here's mine." "Great. Meeting adjourned." I don't know...
TW Wallpaper - Children of Earth
Aug. 27th, 2009 07:36 pmBeen a long time since I made a wallpaper. But, well, Rob Thomas' new CD is ridiculously inspirational. Lyrics are from his song "Cradlesong." Um, spoilers for Children of Earth. I'll put it behind a cut, just in case. :-)
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( Let me sing for you this cradlesong )
Take if you want. No reposting please. Enjoy! :-)
(1440x900 and 1024x768 sizes)
( Let me sing for you this cradlesong )
Take if you want. No reposting please. Enjoy! :-)